Genre Workshop

1. A genre workshop usually consists of the writer's first draft. The draft consists of more main points without the details. The paper will seem choppy, but the writer's purpose isn't for it to perfectly flow yet. The purpose is just to map out what is needed to be said. The audience is the reader of the paper when entering the workshop. The audience as a whole may not have been clearly set yet. The purpose and audience differ from the final paper because it may not be as clear in the beginning. Both aren't the main goal of the beginning draft.

2. If I were giving workshop feedback for EssayR I would have pointed out the grammatical errors for sure. I would have somehow pointed out that the paper doesn't flow too well, and some of the sentences could be combined. I wouldn't be overly critical, but just enough to help out the writer.